Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Korektita

Text from fajo - English

    • War or not war

    • In this moment there is seriously an argument epidemic in some parts of the world in order to do militaries interventions in a country who did worse actions on his citizens.
    • I think the international community must sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundred thousand innocent persons.
    • Because they will be the first to die.
  • Peace and love.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • In this moment there is seriously an argument epidemic in some parts of the world in order to do militaries interventions in a country who did worse actions on his citizens.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In this moment there isCurrently, there are some seriously an argument epidemic in somes taking place in different parts of the world ion order to dowhether or not militariesy interventions is necessary in a country who did worse actions on his citizensse own citizens committed crimes against their own people.
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    • InAt thise moment, there is seriously an argument epidemicare widespread arguments in some parts of the world in order to doas regards the call for militariesy interventions in a country who did worse actions on his citizenies that infringed their citizens' rights.
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    • I think the international community must sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundred thousand innocent persons.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I think tThe international community must sit down together to have a mediation talkand engage in peaceful discussions in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundreds of thousands of innocent personsople (or lives).
      HockeynutHockeynut profile picture Comments 1
    • I think the international community must sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreementconvene and agree on possible ways to improve the situation of hundreds of thousands of innocent personsople.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
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