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  • The Dark Times

    • Winter is difficult period for me.
    • Each time I think how long and boring it is, how can I manage past through it?
    • This year I tried to follow a scandinavian philosophy, I put my hopes to winter swimming, tried to enjoy each moment and any weather we have..
    • It is just the first part of December, but it seems I ready to give up.
    • The Baltic sea is rough in winter, it’s difficult to find a right time for swimming - strong winds, high waves, rain, low temperature, darkness all ​ these almost constantly and often all together..
    • It’s almost impossible to catch even a little appropriate time.
    • The last time I swam was in first numbers of December the water was +7 °C and the air was 0°C, it is the air and the wind what was the most uncomfortable, not water at all.
  • And darkness..oh, it’s killing me.
    • The light day now is so short, that there are just about two-three hours per day when you can manage without extra lighting.
    • Another problem of my region is that since November to March hardly ever the sky is clear, almost all the time there are grey heavy clouds, even a small clearing up of the sky make me happier, but there are too less of such moments.
    • I spend more time at work now, but it seems a waste of time.
    • Life, and youth especially, is so short, why should we spent it for work and for winter actually too...
    • I wish you lots of light and sun and all the warmth!

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    • This year I tried to follow a scandinavian philosophy, I put my hopes to winter swimming, tried to enjoy each moment and any weather we have..
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    • This year I tried to follow a sScandinavian philosophy,. I put my hopes toin winter swimming, tried to enjoy each moment and anyno matter what weather we have..
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    • The Baltic sea is rough in winter, it’s difficult to find a right time for swimming - strong winds, high waves, rain, low temperature, darkness all ​ these almost constantly and often all together..
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    • The Baltic sea is rough in winter, i. It’s difficult to find a right time for swimming - s. Strong winds, high waves, rain, low temperatures, darkness a... All ​ these are almost constantly and often all together..
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    • The Baltic sea is rough in winter, it’s difficult to find athe right time for swimming - s. Strong winds, high waves, rain, low temperature, darkness all ​ thesre almost constantly present and often all together..
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    • The last time I swam was in first numbers of December the water was +7 °C and the air was 0°C, it is the air and the wind what was the most uncomfortable, not water at all.
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    • The last time I swam was in first numberda6s of December t. The water was +7 °C and the air was 0°C, i0°C. It is the air and the wind whatich was the most uncomfortable, not water at all of all, not the water.
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    • The last time I swam was in first numbersat the start of December t. The water was +7 °C and the air was 0°C, it i. It's the air and the wind wthat was themakes it most uncomfortable, not water at all.the water.
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    • The light day now is so short, that there are just about two-three hours per day when you can manage without extra lighting.
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    • The Daylight day now is so short, that t. There are justonly about two-three hours per day when you can manage without extra lighting.
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    • Another problem of my region is that since November to March hardly ever the sky is clear, almost all the time there are grey heavy clouds, even a small clearing up of the sky make me happier, but there are too less of such moments.
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    • Another problem of my region is that since November toand until March thardly evert the sky is hardly ever clear, a. Almost all the time there are grey heavy clouds, e. Even a small clearing up of the patch of sky makes me happier, but there are too less offew such moments.
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    • Another problem of my region is that sincefrom November to March, the sky is hardly ever the sky is clear,clear. For almost all of the time, there are grey, heavy clouds, even a s. Small clearing up ofs in the sky make me happier, but therse are too less of such moments.moments rarely occur
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    • Life, and youth especially, is so short, why should we spent it for work and for winter actually too...
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    • Life, and youth especially, is so short, w. Why should we spent it foron work and for winter actually tooeven so during winter...
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    • Life, and youth especially, is so short, why should we spentd it for working and for winter actually tooespecially during winter...?
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