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  • Abstract for scientific essay

    • Over the past 20 years, stagnant trends have emerged in the study of the religious life of the Evenki people in China.
    • This phenomenon is expressed both at the level of the material itself and at the level of theories applied to the material.
    • As for the material, the problem is this: the collection of new data has practically stopped, and the existing ones are simply rewritten by the authors from book to book.
    • In addition, Chinese literature about the Evenki religion suffers from the fact that deities and rituals are often given in a continuous list, which makes it unclear which of the three (and in fact four - each with its own significant features of religious life) Evenki groups in China they belong to.
    • The problem with theories is that Chinese scientists mainly use theories from the early 20th century (for example, Lévy-Bruhl animism).
    • Thus, the theoretical understanding of the already collected material actually stands still.
    • In addition, Chinese science uses as something beyond doubt the theory of the Baikal origin of the Evenki (its author is G.M.
    • Vasilevich), taken from Soviet ethnography of the 60s.
  • In the last twenty years in Russia, this theory was first questioned by new archaeological data, and then finally refuted by population genetics data.
  • Vasilevich’s theory creates misconceptions about the history of the key ritual of bear meat for the Evenki, and therefore also relates to issues of religion.
  • All this together does not allow us to comprehend the religious customs of the Evenki as natural, socially conditioned phenomena.
    • Because of this, rituals are perceived only as eccentricities or means of preserving ethnic identity, and fairy tales that reveal the meaning of rituals become only “folklore heritage.” Meanwhile, both of the problems described above are easily solved by turning to the materials of Russian scientists on similar elements of the religion and folklore of the Evenki of Russia (39,000 Evenki live in Russia), as well as to theories (Russian and originating from other not Chinese countries), which do not necessarily have their roots in the study Evenki.
    • If we move to the level of specifics, the problem of material is solved through a comparison of the main ritual and folklore complexes between the Evenki of Russia and China.
    • In total, four such complexes will be studied in this work: these are the cults of the bear, deer, Bainachi (山神父) and the Fox Saint.
    • These cults were chosen by the author because as a result of his field research, it was found that they are the most widely professed among the Evenks (or played such a role in the past, as was the case with the cult of the deer).

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    • Over the past 20 years, stagnant trends have emerged in the study of the religious life of the Evenki people in China.
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    • Over the past 20 years, stagnant trends have emerged in the study of the religious life of thChinese Evenki people in China.'s religion.
    • Over the past 20 years, stagnant trends have emerged in the study of the religious life of the Evenki people in China has stagnated.
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    • This phenomenon is expressed both at the level of the material itself and at the level of theories applied to the material.
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    • This phenomenon is expressed both at the level of the material itself and at the level ofthe theories applied to the material.
    • This phenomenon is expressed both at the level of the material itself and at the levelstage of development of theories applied to the material.
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    • As for the material, the problem is this: the collection of new data has practically stopped, and the existing ones are simply rewritten by the authors from book to book.
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    • As for the material, the problem is this:at the collection of new data has practically stopped, and the existing ones are simply rewritten by the authors from book to book.
    • As for the material, the problem is this: the collection of new data has practically stopped, and the existing ones are simply rewritten by the authors from book to book.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
  • cümle 4
    • In addition, Chinese literature about the Evenki religion suffers from the fact that deities and rituals are often given in a continuous list, which makes it unclear which of the three (and in fact four - each with its own significant features of religious life) Evenki groups in China they belong to.
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    • In addition, Chinese literature about the Evenki religion suffers from the fact that deities and rituals are often given in a continuous lists, which makes it uncleardo not differentiate which of the three (and in fact four - each with its own significant features of religious life) Evenki groups in China they belong to.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
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    • The problem with theories is that Chinese scientists mainly use theories from the early 20th century (for example, Lévy-Bruhl animism).
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    • The problem with these theories is that Chinese scientists mainly used theoriesm from the early 20th century (for example, Lévy-Bruhl animism).
    • The principle problem with theoriessuch literature is that Chinese scientists mainly use theories from the early 20th century (for example, Lévy-Bruhl animism).
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 5YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
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    • In addition, Chinese science uses as something beyond doubt the theory of the Baikal origin of the Evenki (its author is G.M.
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    • In addition, Chinese science uses as somethingadheres to, beyond doubt, the theory of the Baikal origin of the Evenki (its author is G.M.
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 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
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    • In the last twenty years in Russia, this theory was first questioned by new archaeological data, and then finally refuted by population genetics data.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
  • cümle 10
    • Vasilevich’s theory creates misconceptions about the history of the key ritual of bear meat for the Evenki, and therefore also relates to issues of religion.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 10YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 10
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    • Because of this, rituals are perceived only as eccentricities or means of preserving ethnic identity, and fairy tales that reveal the meaning of rituals become only “folklore heritage.” Meanwhile, both of the problems described above are easily solved by turning to the materials of Russian scientists on similar elements of the religion and folklore of the Evenki of Russia (39,000 Evenki live in Russia), as well as to theories (Russian and originating from other not Chinese countries), which do not necessarily have their roots in the study Evenki.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Because of this, rituals are perceived only as eccentricities or means of preserving ethnic identity, and fairy tales that reveal the meaning of rituals become only “folklore heritage.”¶
      Meanwhile, both of the problems described above are easily
      resolved by turning to the materials of Russian scientists on similar elements of the religion and folklore of the Evenki of Russia (39,000 Evenki live in Russia), as well as to theories (Russian and others originating from other not Chinese countrienon-Chinese nations), which do not necessarily have their roots in the study of the Evenki.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 12YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 12
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    • If we move to the level of specifics, the problem of material is solved through a comparison of the main ritual and folklore complexes between the Evenki of Russia and China.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • If we move to the level of specifics, the problem ofMoving to specifics, the problem of (what type of material??????) material is solved through a comparison of the main ritual and folklore complexes between the Evenki of Russia and China.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 13YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13
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    • In total, four such complexes will be studied in this work: these are the cults of the bear, deer, Bainachi (山神父) and the Fox Saint.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • In total, four such complexes will be studied in this work: these are the cCults of the bBear, dCult of the Deer, Bainachi (山神父) and the Fox Saint.
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 14YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14
  • cümle 15
    • These cults were chosen by the author because as a result of his field research, it was found that they are the most widely professed among the Evenks (or played such a role in the past, as was the case with the cult of the deer).
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • These cults were chosen by the author because, as a result of his field research, it was found that they are the most widely professed among the Evenks (or have played such a role in the past, as was the case with the cCult of the dDeer). ¶
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 15YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 15