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  • A Magic Silence

  • Have you ever see a silent movie?
    • Some years ago I just only heard of it and thought it’s something as old as time.
    • But then I got to the showing within of the silent film festival called ”Elektrichka”.
    • This small festival passes in the seaside town in open air and became annual and associate to me with the summer, as a part of this special and so loving by me time.
    • During the summer there are about 3-4 shows of silent movies, each time different and what was surprising for me - interesting and often with a deep meaning.
    • Of course a silent movie comes to this not at once, there were a long way till it became a great thing with an elaborate plot, diverse shooting, tricks, intertitles, musical accompaniments and so on.
    • Due to the fact that a cinematograph was silent, it uses the other ways of expression such as special kind of pantomime.
    • Really amazing how expressive movements of actors, how much can shows a silent face.
    • Silent movie reached the peak of its prowess by mid-1920.
    • At that time appears the best films of that era.
    • Such as for example Sherlock, Jr, The General, The Gold Rush and lots of other.
    • It’s not surprising that legends of a fallen era were against of arrival of sound, but anyway it comes.
    • It came and supplanted expressive silence, so sunsets the era of silent films.
    • Although lots of films of that time were destroyed, not more than 25% reached as, I guess the best are still there and able to give us a magic summer evening in a seaside town, the evening when a fallen era comes alive again.

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    • This small festival passes in the seaside town in open air and became annual and associate to me with the summer, as a part of this special and so loving by me time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This small festival passes inby the seaside town inand is held in the open air and. It's became annual and associate tod by me with the summer, as a part of this special and so lovinged by me time.
    • This small festival passesIt is a small, open air festival and takes place in thea seaside town in open air and became. I visit it annually and associate ito me with the summer, as a part of this special and so loving by me tim. I have many special and fond memories from my time spent here.
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    • During the summer there are about 3-4 shows of silent movies, each time different and what was surprising for me - interesting and often with a deep meaning.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • During the summer there are about 3-4 showings of silent movies, each time different , and what was surprising for me - each being interesting and often with a deep meaning.
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    • Of course a silent movie comes to this not at once, there were a long way till it became a great thing with an elaborate plot, diverse shooting, tricks, intertitles, musical accompaniments and so on.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Of course a silent movie comes to this not all at once, t. There wereas a long way period of development 'till it became a great thing with an elaborate plot, diverse shooting, tricks, intersubtitles, musical accompaniments and so on.
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    • Due to the fact that a cinematograph was silent, it uses the other ways of expression such as special kind of pantomime.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Due to the fact that a cinematographthe film was silent, it uses thed other waymeans of expression such as a special kind of pantomime.
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    • Although lots of films of that time were destroyed, not more than 25% reached as, I guess the best are still there and able to give us a magic summer evening in a seaside town, the evening when a fallen era comes alive again.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Although lots of films of that time were destroyed, not more than 25% reached as,survived to this day. I guess the best are still there and able to give us a magic summer evening in a seaside town, the evening when a fallen era comes alive again.
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