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Văn bản từ CEDRICLANARRE - English

    • Freestyling and just having fun

    • I’m doing now what I should have done since day one: focus on free styling and just having fun.
    • While everybody was busy taking themselves seriously, I should have followed the lead of people like Biz Markie.
    • I’m not saying everything in my life was hunky dory, but honestly, I had no valid reason to be angry.
    • It was crazy; we all tried to sound like Public Enemy, although we lived in a completely different reality.
    • There are many aspects of the U.S. that I am fond of, but overall I’m glad I was born on this side of the pond.
    • It is especially so when it comes to race relations: for instance, France has never practiced segregation.
    • I tried to follow wrong ideas to their logical conclusion, and ended up in a state of deep confusion, not only with respect to race and identity, but also regarding my relationship with the Deity.

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  • câu 1
    • I’m doing now what I should have done since day one: focus on free styling and just having fun.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’m doing now what I should have don have commenced on my objective since day one: focusing on free styling and just having fun.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 2
    • While everybody was busy taking themselves seriously, I should have followed the lead of people like Biz Markie.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • While everybody was busy taking themselves seriouslypreoccupied with their conversations, I should have followed the lead of people like Biz Markie.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 3
    • I’m not saying everything in my life was hunky dory, but honestly, I had no valid reason to be angry.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I’m not saying that everything in my life was hunky dory, but honestly, I had no valid reason to beportray my own angery.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • It was crazy; we all tried to sound like Public Enemy, although we lived in a completely different reality.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It was crazy; wmind-blowing. We all tried to sound likmimic the Public Enemy, although w despite liveding in a completely different reality.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • There are many aspects of the U.S. that I am fond of, but overall I’m glad I was born on this side of the pond.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • There are many aspects of the U.S. that I am fond ofamiliar with, but overall, I’m glad that I was born on this side of the pond.
      dadivasremdadivasrem profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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  • câu 6
    • It is especially so when it comes to race relations: for instance, France has never practiced segregation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It is especially so when it comes ton terms of race relations: for instance, France has never practiced segregation.
      dadivasremdadivasrem profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • I tried to follow wrong ideas to their logical conclusion, and ended up in a state of deep confusion, not only with respect to race and identity, but also regarding my relationship with the Deity.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • I tried to follow wrongblundered ideas to theircome up with a logical conclusion, and. Yet, I ended up in a state of deep confusion, not only with respect topandemonium, not only because of race and identity, but also regardingbecause of my relationship with the Deity.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7