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    • Miscussion about the importance of language, especially the acc

    • For people of England is the accent a very important topic.
    • They learn early how you use an accent and how you distinguish different accents.
    • They are Yorkshire, Midlands, Received Pronunciation and Estuary.
    • Every one stands for something e.g.
    • your region where you from or if you intelligent or “posh”.
    • So your English fellow men can put you in a category and that isn’t nice because maybe you could get treated wrong (like in the short story “a question of accent” where a girl gets harassed because of her Hertfordshire accent which not fits in Yorkshire).
    • So the English put you in a social category, it is possible that they treat you influenced by you accent although they know nothing about your intelligence or job or status.
    • Another problem is the misunderstanding between the different types, sometimes they can´t understand the words because of a divers pronunciation.
    • That’s some examples why the language is so important; because of those accents people have so much problems (primarily social problems).
    • They view of this topic should get changed by the people themselves, nobody deserves to get punished because his intonation may be not right.
    • It’s okay to have different accents and to get known where the person is from and so on the only problem is the personal attitude in relating to other accents (that’s why I comment to be more tolerant and not filled of prejudice).

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    • So your English fellow men can put you in a category and that isn’t nice because maybe you could get treated wrong (like in the short story “a question of accent” where a girl gets harassed because of her Hertfordshire accent which not fits in Yorkshire).
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    • So your English fellow men can put you in a category and that isn’t nice because maybe you could get treated wrong (likeUnfortunately, this can result in prejudice even among English speakers. This is exemplified in the short story “a q"A Question of aAccent” where" in which a girl getis harassed in Yorkshire because of her Hertfordshire accent which not fits in Yorkshire).
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    • So the English put you in a social category, it is possible that they treat you influenced by you accent although they know nothing about your intelligence or job or status.
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    • So the English put you in a social category, it is possible that they treat you influenced by your accent although they know nothing about your intelligence or job or status.
    • So the EnglThish put you in a social category, it is possible that they treat you influenced by you accent although they know nothing about your intelligence or job or statusrejudicial classification is not necessarily based on intelligence, occupation or actual social status, but merely on aural cues, leading to inappropriate treatment in society.
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    • Another problem is the misunderstanding between the different types, sometimes they can´t understand the words because of a divers pronunciation.
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    • Another problem is thissue misunderstanding between the different types, sometimes they can´t understand the words because of a divers pronunciation English accents can be so diverse that comprehension is impeded, despite being "English".
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    • Another problem is the misunderstanding between the different types, sometimes they can´t understand the words because of a diverse pronunciation.
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    • That’s some examples why the language is so important; because of those accents people have so much problems (primarily social problems).
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    • That’sese are some examples why the language is so important; because of those accents people have so much problems (primarily social problems)even differences in accents lead to social issues among speakers of the same language.
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    • They view of this topic should get changed by the people themselves, nobody deserves to get punished because his intonation may be not right.
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    • They view of this topicPeople should get changed by the people themselves, their views on accents, as nobody deserves to getbe punished because his intonation may be not rightfor spoken intonation.
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    • It’s okay to have different accents and to get known where the person is from and so on the only problem is the personal attitude in relating to other accents (that’s why I comment to be more tolerant and not filled of prejudice).
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    • It’s okay to have different accents and to get known where the person is from and so on the only problem is the personal attitude in relating to other accents (that’Different accents are indicative of a person's origin, but should not impede relationships among people. This is why I commewant to be more tolerant and not filled ofwith prejudice). ¶.
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