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Văn bản từ ramrex - English

  • For those who want to live.

  • It’s difficult to but your goals and decide the rules and thoughts without knowing the meaning of your life.
  • Recently, by research and a many of philosophes describe the strength of human it’s to know himself, recognize his thoughts and more close to their heart.
  • We can see these people that they have the chance to feel a new experience and into in risky activities, more power and confidence.
  • Instead of those people, they are afraid of anything and put a many excuses for everything in their life, excuses for their failure and many things.
  • In this blog, I need to make myself more confidante and brake all barriers to write what I think about without judgment or evaluation of me.
  • In the end, I’m preparing for my IELTS test, so it’s hard to continue studying and writing a new language.
  • At least I try, thank you so much for you reading, I hope you to read my writing in excellent level next time.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • It’s difficult to but your goals and decide the rules and thoughts without knowing the meaning of your life.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • Recently, by research and a many of philosophes describe the strength of human it’s to know himself, recognize his thoughts and more close to their heart.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • We can see these people that they have the chance to feel a new experience and into in risky activities, more power and confidence.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Instead of those people, they are afraid of anything and put a many excuses for everything in their life, excuses for their failure and many things.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • In this blog, I need to make myself more confidante and brake all barriers to write what I think about without judgment or evaluation of me.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • In the end, I’m preparing for my IELTS test, so it’s hard to continue studying and writing a new language.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • At least I try, thank you so much for you reading, I hope you to read my writing in excellent level next time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7