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  • For those who want to live.

  • It’s difficult to but your goals and decide the rules and thoughts without knowing the meaning of your life.
  • Recently, by research and a many of philosophes describe the strength of human it’s to know himself, recognize his thoughts and more close to their heart.
  • We can see these people that they have the chance to feel a new experience and into in risky activities, more power and confidence.
  • Instead of those people, they are afraid of anything and put a many excuses for everything in their life, excuses for their failure and many things.
  • In this blog, I need to make myself more confidante and brake all barriers to write what I think about without judgment or evaluation of me.
  • In the end, I’m preparing for my IELTS test, so it’s hard to continue studying and writing a new language.
  • At least I try, thank you so much for you reading, I hope you to read my writing in excellent level next time.

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    • Recently, by research and a many of philosophes describe the strength of human it’s to know himself, recognize his thoughts and more close to their heart.
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    • We can see these people that they have the chance to feel a new experience and into in risky activities, more power and confidence.
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    • Instead of those people, they are afraid of anything and put a many excuses for everything in their life, excuses for their failure and many things.
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    • In this blog, I need to make myself more confidante and brake all barriers to write what I think about without judgment or evaluation of me.
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