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AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjaamaton

Text from Hoangoanh290794 - English

Dear my uncle Today I feel comfortable because I feel like many things changed very much, I mean that I have many developed points.
Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
I felt it’s really difficult to work in a company as an officer.
But whenever I undergo each different job, I feel I become more mature, I can find money for myself.

Otsikko
- Dear my uncle Today I feel comfortable because I feel like many things changed very much, I mean that I have many developed points.
  Äänestä nyt!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Otsikko
Lause 1
- Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
  Äänestä nyt!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 1
Lause 2
- I felt it’s really difficult to work in a company as an officer.
  Äänestä nyt!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 2
Lause 3
- But whenever I undergo each different job, I feel I become more mature, I can find money for myself.
  Äänestä nyt!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 3