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  • Dear my uncle Today I feel comfortable because I feel like many things changed very much, I mean that I have many developed points.

  • Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
  • I felt it’s really difficult to work in a company as an officer.
  • But whenever I undergo each different job, I feel I become more mature, I can find money for myself.

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    • Before moving here,I was a person without job,I felt it’s hard to have some money to buy what I want expect your money.
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