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Text from Sylviane346 - English

    • This Is Terrible

    • I like watching TED Talks.
  • People share their experiences in interesting ways.
  • First, I watch a video without subtitles, then with English subtitles, and from time to time, I watch it a third time with French subtitles, which is my native language.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?” The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • This is over double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
    • As more gases are released, the climate warms.
    • Due to this positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.

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    • First, I watch a video without subtitles, then with English subtitles, and from time to time, I watch it a third time with French subtitles, which is my native language.
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    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?” The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
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    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in aArctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and
      subsequent decomposingtion of organic material thanks toby microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hHidden in arctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible
      : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.


      NOTE: TED Talk
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    • This is over double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
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    • This is overwould be more than double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
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    • Due to this positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.
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    • DPermafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released due to thise positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released. created by the heating effect of greater quantities of these gases in the atmosphere.¶



    • Due to this positive feedback loop, permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.
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