Korektoj

Text from Sylviane346 - English

    • This Is Terrible

    • I like watching TED Talks.
  • People share their experiences in interesting ways.
  • First, I watch a video without subtitles, then with English subtitles, and from time to time, I watch it a third time with French subtitles, which is my native language.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?” The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • This is over double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
    • As more gases are released, the climate warms.
    • Due to this positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • First, I watch a video without subtitles, then with English subtitles, and from time to time, I watch it a third time with French subtitles, which is my native language.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?” The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in aArctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and
      subsequent decomposingtion of organic material thanks toby microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hHidden in arctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible
      : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.
    • The last TED talk I watched was titled : ”What’s hidden in arctic ice?”¶

      The conclusion of this episode is terrible : by thawing and decomposing organic material thanks to microorganisms, permafrost will emit more carbon dioxide and methane than ever before.


      NOTE: TED Talk
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 4
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    • This is over double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • This is overwould be more than double the amount in Earth’s atmosphere as of 2022 and more than humans have ever discharged by burning fossil fuels.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
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    • Due to this positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • DPermafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released due to thise positive feedback loop permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released. created by the heating effect of greater quantities of these gases in the atmosphere.¶



    • Due to this positive feedback loop, permafrost keeps thawing and more greenhouse gases are released.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7