Nhờ sửa bài giúp

Văn bản từ dorianzeta - English

  • Letter application open work permit

    • Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jenmy Apolinario Chaupiz and I would like to thank you for reviewing my application for an open work permit.
    • I have been married to Dorian Zevallos Olano for almost 11 years, we have a 10 years old daughter named Leire Zevallos Apolinario.
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing but also challenging experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and my husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
  • All that we have been through all these years has made our relationship and family stronger, giving our children a strong sense of how important it is to face challenges and look for a life purpose.
    • It’s a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by her side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
    • I am currently a business partner of the company XXX (I have included the company’s letter of registration with the application).
    • It was found in 20XX and since that I am in charge of the logistic department.
    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where my husband will be reinserted into the Peruvian labor market, having new skills; me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
  • My husband will apply all the knowledge learned in his own company.
    • In the same way this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience is well appreciated.
  • Also, both of us have our elder parents with who we are very close and we plan to take care of them as they get older.
    • And finally, we have a property; a plot of land that we plan to maintain as an investment and later build to become our family residence.
    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine, I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jenmy Apolinario Chaupiz and I would like to thank you for reviewing my application for an open work permit.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Dear Sir/Madam,



      My name is Jenmy Apolinario Chaupiz and I would like to thank you for reviewing my application for an open work permit.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I have been married to Dorian Zevallos Olano for almost 11 years, we have a 10 years old daughter named Leire Zevallos Apolinario.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have been married to Dorian Zevallos Olano for almost 11 years, w. We have a 10 years old daughter named Leire Zevallos Apolinario.
    • I have been married to Dorian Zevallos Olano for almost 11 years, and we have a 10 years old daughter named Leire Zevallos Apolinario.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology programme at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics rRepair tTechnology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and where he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing but also challenging experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; t. Therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing, but also challenging, experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and my husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and m. My husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • All that we have been through all these years has made our relationship and family stronger, giving our children a strong sense of how important it is to face challenges and look for a life purpose.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • It’s a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by her side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It's a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by heris side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I am currently a business partner of the company XXX (I have included the company’s letter of registration with the application).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I am currently a business partner of the company XXX (which I have included the company's letter of registration with the application).
    • I am currently a business partner of the company XXX (I hav. Please fincluded the company’s letter of registration with the application).
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
  • câu 10
    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where my husband will be reinserted into the Peruvian labor market, having new skills; me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where m. My husband will be reinsertestablished into the Peruvian labor market, having with his new skills;, and me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and, I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
  • câu 12
    • In the same way this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience is well appreciated.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In the same way, this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience abroad is well appreciated.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • Also, both of us have our elder parents with who we are very close and we plan to take care of them as they get older.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • And finally, we have a property; a plot of land that we plan to maintain as an investment and later build to become our family residence.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • And finally, we have a property; --a plot of land that we plan to maintain as an investment and later build to become our family residence.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine, I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine,. I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15