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  • Letter application open work permit

    • Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Jenmy Apolinario Chaupiz and I would like to thank you for reviewing my application for an open work permit.
    • I have been married to Dorian Zevallos Olano for almost 11 years, we have a 10 years old daughter named Leire Zevallos Apolinario.
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing but also challenging experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and my husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
  • All that we have been through all these years has made our relationship and family stronger, giving our children a strong sense of how important it is to face challenges and look for a life purpose.
    • It’s a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by her side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
    • I am currently a business partner of the company XXX (I have included the company’s letter of registration with the application).
    • It was found in 20XX and since that I am in charge of the logistic department.
    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where my husband will be reinserted into the Peruvian labor market, having new skills; me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
  • My husband will apply all the knowledge learned in his own company.
    • In the same way this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience is well appreciated.
  • Also, both of us have our elder parents with who we are very close and we plan to take care of them as they get older.
    • And finally, we have a property; a plot of land that we plan to maintain as an investment and later build to become our family residence.
    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine, I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.

SIUSPLAU, AJUDA A CORREGIR CADA SENTÈNCIA! - English

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    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
      Vota ara!
    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics repair technology programme at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
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    • My husband has been admitted to the Electronics rRepair tTechnology program at the Vancouver Community College in British Columbia, and where he will start his studies in the 2023 Spring intake.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
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    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing but also challenging experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
      Vota ara!
    • The Electronics repair technology program is a full-time course; t. Therefore, I want to provide the support my husband will need through this amazing, but also challenging, experience that he has been looking forward to having for so long.
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      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4
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    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and my husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
      Vota ara!
    • We have been a couple for many years, and we have been through a lot, and m. My husband has supported me and made sacrifices so that I could grow professionally, in the past; always thinking that we were building a future together.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 5Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 5
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    • All that we have been through all these years has made our relationship and family stronger, giving our children a strong sense of how important it is to face challenges and look for a life purpose.
      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 6Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 6
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    • It’s a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by her side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
      Vota ara!
    • It’'s a dream for my husband to study abroad and meet people from around the world and have this experience to grow personally and professionally, and I would be more than happy to be there by heris side to make this dream come true at this point in our lives.
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      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 7Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 7
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    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where my husband will be reinserted into the Peruvian labor market, having new skills; me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
      Vota ara!
    • After my husband graduates, we will leave Canada and come back to Peru where m. My husband will be reinsertestablished into the Peruvian labor market, having with his new skills;, and me with fluent English and a new perspective from working abroad and, I will continue working as a business partner of XXX.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 10Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 10
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    • In the same way this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience is well appreciated.
      Vota ara!
    • In the same way, this knowledge will give him the advantage to be well considerate in great job positions because, in our country, the abroad experience abroad is well appreciated.
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    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 12Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 12
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    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine, I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.
      Vota ara!
    • Lastly, I would like to declare that all information you will find in all forms and this letter is genuine,. I understand my visa conditions and I will not overstay in the country.
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      Vota ara!
    • Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 15Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 15