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  • Was Julia happy in marriage?

    • Many people think that a long and happy marriage is kind of art.
    • The author William Somerset Maugham tried to demonstrate us his view of this rather controversial subject in his novel “Theatre”.
    • So, let us talk about the main characters Julia Lambert and her husband Michael Gosselin.
  • Was Julia happy in marriage?
  • Did her feelings change over the years?
    • At the beginning of the novel the writer describes Julia Lambert as an actress who has achieved everything she could only wish of.
    • She is the most famous actress of England, talented and rich woman.
    • Her love story with Michael Gosselin have started when they were quite young.
    • She met her future husband at the theatre those days he was incredibly handsome, but unfortunately, talentless as an actor.
    • Julia fell in love with him at the first sight, but could not achieve reciprocal love at that moment.
    • But then, their relationship became quite serious and, eventually, they were married.
    • Many years later, Julia became a bit disillusioned with Michael who has already turned into a director of a theatre, though he was a good business partner for her.
    • In my opinion, she overthought, and perhaps she just was very bored.
    • Julia as all the creative personalities needed the inspiration and wanted to be loved, so she dissolved completely in a young lover accountant Thomas.
    • She saw him as a young and ambitious youth .
    • The woman even helped him in every possible way with money and tried to accustom him to secular society so that he didn’t leave her.
    • And I only can suppose that she was playing the happiness that period, because Thomas was using her for his own purposes but she couldn’t do anything.
    • At some point, the middle-aged woman realized that her behaviour was very stupid and incorrect after she took revenge on him, she into the family nest.
    • She does not receive love from her husband.
    • She wants some new sensations and emotions.
    • I believe that only the scene brought her happiness and she was really happy here.
    • I even can say metaphorically she was happy married with the theatre.

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    • The author William Somerset Maugham tried to demonstrate us his view of this rather controversial subject in his novel “Theatre”.
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    • The author William Somerset Maugham tried to demonstrate to us his view ofn this rather controversial subject in his novel “Theatre”.
    • The author William Somerset Maugham tried to demonstrate to us his view of this rather controversial subject in his novel “Theatre”.
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    • At the beginning of the novel the writer describes Julia Lambert as an actress who has achieved everything she could only wish of.
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    • At the beginning of the novel the writer describes Julia Lambert as an actress who has achieved everything she could only wish ofor.
    • At the beginning of the novel, the writer describes Julia Lambert as an actress who has achieved everything she could onlyhave wish ofed for.
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    • She met her future husband at the theatre those days he was incredibly handsome, but unfortunately, talentless as an actor.
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    • She met her future husband at the theatre. In those days he was incredibly handsome, but, unfortunately, talentless as an actor.
    • She met her future husband atin the theatre those days, when he was an incredibly handsome, but unfortunately, talentless as antalented, actor.
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    • Julia fell in love with him at the first sight, but could not achieve reciprocal love at that moment.
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    • Julia fell in love with him at the first sight, but could not achieve reciprocal love at that moment.her love for him was not reciprocated.
    • Julia fell in love with him at the first sight, but could not achievea love was not reciprocal loveted at that momenttime.
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    • Many years later, Julia became a bit disillusioned with Michael who has already turned into a director of a theatre, though he was a good business partner for her.
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    • Many years later, Julia became a bit disillusioned with Michael who has already turned into a director of a theatre, thoughbecome a theatre director. In any case he was a good business partner for her.
    • Many years later, Julia became a bit disillusioned with Michael, who has already turned into a director of a theatre, though he wasd become a theatre director, although he remained for her a good business partner for her.
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    • Julia as all the creative personalities needed the inspiration and wanted to be loved, so she dissolved completely in a young lover accountant Thomas.
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    • Julia, as all thewith all creative personalities, needed the inspiration and wanted to be loved, so she dissolvedfell completely infor a young lover, an accountant called Thomas.
    • Julia, as allis the creative personalitiesase with many creative people, needed the inspiration and wanted to be loved, so she dissolvedbecame completely immersed in a young lover, an accountant named Thomas.
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    • The woman even helped him in every possible way with money and tried to accustom him to secular society so that he didn’t leave her.
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    • The womanJulia even helped him in every possible way with money and tried to accustom him to secular society so that he didn’t leave her.
    • TShe woman even helped him in every possible way with money and tried to accustomway she could financially and by exposing him to secularpolite society so that he diwouldn't leave her.
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    • And I only can suppose that she was playing the happiness that period, because Thomas was using her for his own purposes but she couldn’t do anything.
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    • And I only can suppose that she was playing thefor happiness in that period, because Thomas was using her for his own purposes b. But she couldn’t do anything.
    • And I only can suppose that she was playpretending tho be happinessy during that period, because Thomas was using her for his own purposes, but she couldn’t do anythingwas powerless to do resist.
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    • At some point, the middle-aged woman realized that her behaviour was very stupid and incorrect after she took revenge on him, she into the family nest.
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    • At some point, the middle-aged womanJulia realized that her behaviour was very stupid and incorrect a. Afterwards she took revenge on him, she in. She then returned back to the family nest.
    • At some point, thea middle-aged womanJulia realized that her behaviour was very stupid and incorrect, so after she tooktaking revenge on him, she inThomas, she returned to ther family nest.
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