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    • Abstract for scientific essay

    • The article offered to the reader gives a brief overview of two theories of the origin of the Evenks prevailing in Chinese ethnography, and also describes the third, a new theory of their origin, which was created by the Russian scientist M.G.Turov.
    • Such an article became necessary because the old theories (both were created by Russian scientists) have hardly been updated or verified by Chinese science over the past half century.
    • In addition, as will be shown in this text, both theories initially had insufficiently reliable grounds.
    • At the same time, over the past fifty years there has been progress in the field of population genetics, as well as the accumulation of new historical and ethnographic materials on the Evenks has not stopped.
    • As a result of these changes, the previous theories lost their relevance and it became necessary to create a new theory.
    • However, the new theory created more than ten years ago is still unknown to the authors of scientific papers in China.
    • This article is an attempt to introduce M.G.Turov’s constructions into the circulation of Chinese science.

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    • The article offered to the reader gives a brief overview of two theories of the origin of the Evenks prevailing in Chinese ethnography, and also describes the third, a new theory of their origin, which was created by the Russian scientist M.G.Turov.
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    • Theis article offered to the reader gives a brief overview of two theories of the origin of the Evenks prevailing in Chinese ethnography, and also describes the third, a new theory of their origin, which was created by the Russian scientist M.G.Turov.
    • The article offered to the reader givessay provides a brief overview of two theories of the origin of the Evenks prevailing in Chinese ethnography, and also describes theChinese ethnographers regarding the origin of the Evenks people of China, while also presenting a third, a (new) theory of their origin, which that was creaposited by the Russian scientistethnographer M.G.Turov.
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    • Such an article became necessary because the old theories (both were created by Russian scientists) have hardly been updated or verified by Chinese science over the past half century.
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    • Such an article becameis necessaryitated because the oldprior theories (both were created by Russian scientists) have been hardly been updated ormodified or even verified by Chinese science over the past half century.
    • Such an article becameThis essay is necessary because the older, prevailing theories (bothat were creaposited by Russian scientists) have hardly beenethnographers have been neither updated nor verificonfirmed by Chinese scienceethnographers over the past half century.
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    • At the same time, over the past fifty years there has been progress in the field of population genetics, as well as the accumulation of new historical and ethnographic materials on the Evenks has not stopped.
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    • At the same timedditionally, over the past fifty years, there has been continual progress in the field of population genetics, as well as the accumulation of new historical and ethnographic materials on the Evenks has not stopped.
    • At the same time, oOver the past fifty years there has been much progress in the field of population genetics, as well as the accumulationdiscovery of new historical and ethnographic materials on the Evenks has not stoppedpertaining to the Evenks people.
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    • As a result of these changes, the previous theories lost their relevance and it became necessary to create a new theory.
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    • As a result of these changes, bothe previous theories lost their relevance and it became necessary to createbecame redundant, thereby necessitating a new theory.
    • As a result of these changes, the previous theories lost their, tenets held by the earlier theories have become less relevancet and ithus it has becaome necessary to createposit a new theory.
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    • This article is an attempt to introduce M.G.Turov’s constructions into the circulation of Chinese science.
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    • This article is an attempt to introduce M.G.Turov’s constructions into the circulation of Chinese sciencedraw the attention of Chinese science to M.G.Turov’s theory (or hypothesis if it doesn't have sufficient evidence to define it as a scientific theory).
    • This article is an attemptessay seeks to introduce M.G.Turov’s constructions into the circulation of Chinese sciencetheories to the ethnographic literature of China.
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