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Scriptum ab zolle - English

  • Formal letter

    • For the attention of the magazine’s editor.
    • I write this letter to express my deep dissatisfaction with the photographs your magazine has recently published showing my family and me while we were on holiday.
    • To start with, these photographs were not taken with my permission nor with my family member’s permission.
  • My intention was to enjoy a peaceful holiday.
    • Instead I have been unceasingly stalked by utterly impolite paparazzi that ignored repeatedly my humble request not to take any photo and respect my private life.
    • Not only they invaded my privacy but to make matters worse they took photos of my two years old son which is unacceptable.
    • It is illegal to photograph a minor and morally questionable.
    • To top it off one of the photographs got excessively close to my wife and hit her causing her physical damage.
    • Due to this accident, we had to go to the hospital and in doing that we had to cut short our holiday.
  • This kind of behaviour is unacceptable and any public figure should go through this type of situations.
    • I politely request that the photographs are withdrawn from the magazine as soon as possible for the psychological and physical damage these photographs have caused me and my family.
    • Where I the editor of the magazine I would attempt to not invade anyone’s privacy.
    • The vast majority of people appreciate their privacy and wish to keep their private lives just like so, private and so do celebrities.
    • Even though sometimes people do not view us as normal people, we are in fact regular people.
    • I genuinely hope for this magazine to improve the quality of its content in the future.
    • I hope this issue can be resolved promptly.
    • Kind regards, Mike

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sententia 1
  • Sententia 2
    • I write this letter to express my deep dissatisfaction with the photographs your magazine has recently published showing my family and me while we were on holiday.
      Elige nunc !
    • I write this letter to express my deepest dissatisfaction with the photographs your magazine has recently published showdepicting my family and meyself while we were on holiday.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 2
  • Sententia 3
  • Sententia 4
  • Sententia 5
    • Instead I have been unceasingly stalked by utterly impolite paparazzi that ignored repeatedly my humble request not to take any photo and respect my private life.
      Elige nunc !
    • Instead I have been unceasingly stalked by utterly impolite paparazzi that ignoredwho repeatedly ignored my humble request not to take any photographs and to respect my private life.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 5
  • Sententia 6
    • Not only they invaded my privacy but to make matters worse they took photos of my two years old son which is unacceptable.
      Elige nunc !
    • Not only have they invaded my privacy but, to make matters worse, they took photos of my two years old son which is- something totally unacceptable.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 6
  • Sententia 7
  • Sententia 8
    • To top it off one of the photographs got excessively close to my wife and hit her causing her physical damage.
      Elige nunc !
    • To top it offIn an effort to surpass their already disgusting behaviour, one of the photographsaparazzi got excessively close to my wife and hit her - thereby causing her physical damage.
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 8
  • Sententia 9
  • Sententia 10
  • Sententia 11
    • I politely request that the photographs are withdrawn from the magazine as soon as possible for the psychological and physical damage these photographs have caused me and my family.
      Elige nunc !
    • I am therefore politely requesting that the photographs arbe withdrawn from the magazineyour publication as soon as possible fordue to the psychological and physical damage these photographs have caused me and my familyimages have resulted for both my family and myself. ¶

      Furthermore, I demand that the person or persons responsible be held to account for their actions, dismissal from employment being an obvious course of action in this instance
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    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 11
  • Sententia 12
    • Where I the editor of the magazine I would attempt to not invade anyone’s privacy.
      Elige nunc !
    • Where I the editor of the magazine I would attempt to not inva(what comes after, you would not say in a formal letter to an editor de manyone’s privacy.ding the removal of photographs)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 12
  • Sententia 13
    • The vast majority of people appreciate their privacy and wish to keep their private lives just like so, private and so do celebrities.
      Elige nunc !
    • The vast majority of people appreciate their privacy and wish to keep their private lives just like so, private and so do celebrities.(what comes after, you would not say in a formal letter to an editor demanding the removal of photographs)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 13ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 13
  • Sententia 14
    • Even though sometimes people do not view us as normal people, we are in fact regular people.
      Elige nunc !
    • Even though sometimes people do not view us as normal people, we are in fact regular people.(what comes after, you would not say in a formal letter to an editor demanding the removal of photographs)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 14ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 14
  • Sententia 15
    • I genuinely hope for this magazine to improve the quality of its content in the future.
      Elige nunc !
    • I genuinely hope for this magazine to improve the quality of its content (what comes after, you would not say in a formal letter to an editor demanding the future.removal of photographs)
    • ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 15ADDE NOVAM EMENDATIONEM! - Sententia 15
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