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    • My experience

    • Last year, my five months internship at Reims University Hospital in the Geriatric Post- Emergency and Clinical Pharmacy departments allowed me to put into practice and reinforce my knowledge.
    • I conducted hundreds of patients interviewed about their diseases, care pathway, medicines, with the aim to understand and optimize their treatments.
    • Completed with my prior internships in pharmacy, I understood better the healthcare system and the reality on the ground including the difficulties related to staffs or patients.
    • I gained important professional experience and optimized my knowledge of patient care (prise en charge patient).
    • It also gave me a better understanding of the functioning and organization of the hospital, and how it is managed.
    • In clinical pharmacy, I was soon given the responsibility of carrying out interviews for transplant patients.
  • Immunosuppressive treatments have to be taken for life and are therefore restrictive.
    • Failure to adhere to or comply with post-transplant drug treatments is a major problem that can lead to graft rejection and patient death.
    • It is therefore essential to have a discussion with the patient to explain the importance of their treatment and thus encourage compliance.
    • I also ensured continuity of care by contacting the patient’s (retail) pharmacy to remind them that the drugs cannot be substituted.
    • The patient must also be careful about self-medication, so it is important that the pharmacy is aware that the patient has had a transplant.
    • This responsibility gave me more confidence in myself and my medical knowledge, and allowed me to be more autonomous.
    • I also learned how to communicate in a relevant way to patients so that they can better understand their condition /medicines.

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    • Last year, my five months internship at Reims University Hospital in the Geriatric Post- Emergency and Clinical Pharmacy departments allowed me to put into practice and reinforce my knowledge.
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    • Last year, my five months internship at Reims University Hospital in the Geriatric Post- Emergency and Clinical Pharmacy departments allowed me to put into practice my skills and reinforce my knowledge.
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    • I conducted hundreds of patients interviewed about their diseases, care pathway, medicines, with the aim to understand and optimize their treatments.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I conducted hundreds of patients interviewed about theirs. Topics discussed in the interviews included the diseases, care pathway,s and medicines, with the aim to. These conversations helped me better understand and optimize theirpatient treatments.
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  • câu 3
    • Completed with my prior internships in pharmacy, I understood better the healthcare system and the reality on the ground including the difficulties related to staffs or patients.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • CHaving completed with my priormy internships in pharmacy, I understood betterand the healthcare system and the reality on the ground includingbetter as well as the difficulties relatfaced toby staffs or and patients.
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    • I gained important professional experience and optimized my knowledge of patient care (prise en charge patient).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I gained importantcritical professional experience and optimizupgraded my knowledge of patient care (prise en charge patient).
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    • It also gave me a better understanding of the functioning and organization of the hospital, and how it is managed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It also gave me a better understanding of the funcoperationing and organizationmanagement of the hospital, and how it is managed.
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  • câu 6
    • In clinical pharmacy, I was soon given the responsibility of carrying out interviews for transplant patients.
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    • InDuring my clinical pharmacy rotation, I was soon given the responsibility of carrying out interviews for transplant patients.
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    • Failure to adhere to or comply with post-transplant drug treatments is a major problem that can lead to graft rejection and patient death.
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    • Failure to adhere to or comply with post-transplant drug treatments is a major problem that can lead to graft rejection and patient death.
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  • câu 9
    • It is therefore essential to have a discussion with the patient to explain the importance of their treatment and thus encourage compliance.
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    • It is tTherefore, it is essential to have a discussion with the patient to explain the importance of their treatment and thus encourage compliance.
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  • câu 10
    • I also ensured continuity of care by contacting the patient’s (retail) pharmacy to remind them that the drugs cannot be substituted.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I also ensured continuity of care by contacting the patients (retail) pharmacy to remind themphasize that the drugs cannot be substituted.
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  • câu 11
    • The patient must also be careful about self-medication, so it is important that the pharmacy is aware that the patient has had a transplant.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The patient must also be careful aboututious when self-medication, so ing. It is important that the pharmacy is aware that the patient has had a transplant.
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  • câu 12
    • This responsibility gave me more confidence in myself and my medical knowledge, and allowed me to be more autonomous.
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    • This responsibility gave me more self-confidence in myself andregarding my medical knowledge,skills and allowed me to begain more autonomous.independence.
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    • I also learned how to communicate in a relevant way to patients so that they can better understand their condition /medicines.
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    • I also learnedt how to communicate in a relevant way to patients so that they can better understand their condition /and medicines. ¶
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