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  • Medical technology

  • Medical technology solves many difficult health problems.
    • To start with, the technology contributes to raise the awareness about medicine and health as it becomes too easy to find many medical information using Internet or medical applications such as these that helps to calculate calories in food , improve sleep and measure heart rate.
    • Secondly, technology provides new machines , medicines and treatments which helps protecting and improving the chance of many patients to get treated.
    • It also make it possible to find treatments to fatal and rare diseases such a Migraine, Hiv and leukemia . furthermore, Technology have provided a new accurate ways to help researchers to early anticipate the periods of significat spread of nemerous disease which in turn enables to confort them as what happens with flu or with Coronavirus.
    • In conclusion, The new technology facilitates solving sundry health problems.

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    • To start with, the technology contributes to raise the awareness about medicine and health as it becomes too easy to find many medical information using Internet or medical applications such as these that helps to calculate calories in food , improve sleep and measure heart rate.
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    • Secondly, technology provides new machines , medicines and treatments which helps protecting and improving the chance of many patients to get treated.
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    • Secondly, technology provides new machines , medicines and treatments which helps protecting and improving the chance ofopportunity for many patients to get treated.
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    • Secondly, technology provides new machines , medicines and treatments which helpsfacilitate protecting and improving the chancepossibility of many patients to getbeing treated.
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    • It also make it possible to find treatments to fatal and rare diseases such a Migraine, Hiv and leukemia . furthermore, Technology have provided a new accurate ways to help researchers to early anticipate the periods of significat spread of nemerous disease which in turn enables to confort them as what happens with flu or with Coronavirus.
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    • It also makes it possible tofor finding treatments to fatal and rare diseases such a Ms migraine, HivIV and leukemia . fFurthermore, Ttechnology haves provided a new and accurate ways to helpmeans of assisting researchers to earlyin anticipate the periods ofing periods where there is significant spread of neumerous disease whichs. This in turn enables to confort them as what happens with diseases such as ’flu or with Coronavirus to be confronted.
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