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  • Medical technology

  • Medical technology solves many difficult health problems.
    • To start with, the technology contributes to raise the awareness about medicine and health as it becomes too easy to find many medical information using Internet or medical applications such as these that helps to calculate calories in food , improve sleep and measure heart rate.
    • Secondly, technology provides new machines , medicines and treatments which helps protecting and improving the chance of many patients to get treated.
    • It also make it possible to find treatments to fatal and rare diseases such a Migraine, Hiv and leukemia . furthermore, Technology have provided a new accurate ways to help researchers to early anticipate the periods of significat spread of nemerous disease which in turn enables to confort them as what happens with flu or with Coronavirus.
    • In conclusion, The new technology facilitates solving sundry health problems.

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    • To start with, the technology contributes to raise the awareness about medicine and health as it becomes too easy to find many medical information using Internet or medical applications such as these that helps to calculate calories in food , improve sleep and measure heart rate.
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    • It also make it possible to find treatments to fatal and rare diseases such a Migraine, Hiv and leukemia . furthermore, Technology have provided a new accurate ways to help researchers to early anticipate the periods of significat spread of nemerous disease which in turn enables to confort them as what happens with flu or with Coronavirus.
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