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Văn bản từ souhaibd - English

  • Write your story.

    • Although music can help us relax and escape the present world for a while, Sam seems to be hating music at the moment, one song, to be specific.
    • He is having some trouble getting rid of a song he heard the other day and he is keeping singing it the whole day over and over.
    • ”I must stop, it is driving me mad...
    • I cannot focus on anything” Sam says.
  • Despite all of his efforts, Sam couldn’t find a solution to his problem.
    • So he decided to go to his friend Fam to help him forget that song.
    • Fam was silent the whole time while Sam was explaining his issue and stayed silent 2 minutes after Sam finished his talking.
    • Fam finally decided to talk and said ”See, I have been through the same issue before...” Sam interrupted him, ”Really, how did you solve it.” Fam responded, ”Well..., to be honest, I didn’t totally get rid of it but...” Sam again, ”But what?”.
    • Fam hesitated a bit and said, ”I change it to another song I like.” ”What?” says Sam, that’s terrible.
    • Fam smiled and told him that if you cannot get rid of something you hate, at least change it, and winked.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Although music can help us relax and escape the present world for a while, Sam seems to be hating music at the moment, one song, to be specific.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Although music can help us relax and escape the present world for a while, Sam seems to be hating music at the moment, --one song, to be specific.
    • Although music can help us relax and escape the present world for a while, Sam seems to be hating music at the moment, one song, to be specificat the moment Sam seems to hate music in general and one song in particular.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
    • He is having some trouble getting rid of a song he heard the other day and he is keeping singing it the whole day over and over.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • He is having some trouble forgetting rid of a song he heard the other day and he is keepings singing it the whole day over and over.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • Fam was silent the whole time while Sam was explaining his issue and stayed silent 2 minutes after Sam finished his talking.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fam was silent the whole time while Sam was explaining his issue and stayas Sam described his predicament and remained silent 2for two minutes after Sam finished his talking.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Fam finally decided to talk and said ”See, I have been through the same issue before...” Sam interrupted him, ”Really, how did you solve it.” Fam responded, ”Well..., to be honest, I didn’t totally get rid of it but...” Sam again, ”But what?”.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fam finally decided to talk and said, “See, I have been through the same issue before...” Sam interrupted him, Really, how did you solve it.?” Fam responded, Well..., to be honest, I didn't totally get rid of it but...” Sam again, ”But what?”.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • Fam hesitated a bit and said, ”I change it to another song I like.” ”What?” says Sam, that’s terrible.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fam hesitated a bit and said, I changed it to another song I like.” What?” says Sam, that's terrible.
    • Fam hesitated a bit and, then said, ”I would change it to another song I like.” ”What?” saysid Sam, "that’s terrible."
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • Fam smiled and told him that if you cannot get rid of something you hate, at least change it, and winked.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Fam smiled and told him that if you cannot get rid of something you hate, you can at least change it, and then winked.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10