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    • Friendship It’s hard

    • Based in my personal experience It’s better to have a few close friends than a lot of friends.
    • It’s cool have a lot of friends to have fun in a party and hang out.
  • But, most of these friends will not be able to getting advice.
    • This type of friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings or trust because their are not close enough to do this and they don’t even care very much about you.
    • Other thing about this type of friendship is that get over very easy.
    • While, in close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer.

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    • This type of friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings or trust because their are not close enough to do this and they don’t even care very much about you.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • TWhis type ofle such friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings ors are nice, they're not recommended for the sharing of feelings or expecting a deep sense of trust because theiry are notn't sufficiently close enough to do this and they don’t even care very muchreally care about you.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Other thing about this type of friendship is that get over very easy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Other thing about this type ofBut there are aspects of such casual friendship is that get over very easymake them "easy" ... "comfortable" ... "convenient".
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    • While, in close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • While, inIn the case of a close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer. ¶
      , there is trust and someone with whom you can confidently discuss your personal problems.
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      Bầu chọn ngay!
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