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    • Friendship It’s hard

    • Based in my personal experience It’s better to have a few close friends than a lot of friends.
    • It’s cool have a lot of friends to have fun in a party and hang out.
  • But, most of these friends will not be able to getting advice.
    • This type of friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings or trust because their are not close enough to do this and they don’t even care very much about you.
    • Other thing about this type of friendship is that get over very easy.
    • While, in close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer.

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    • This type of friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings or trust because their are not close enough to do this and they don’t even care very much about you.
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    • TWhis type ofle such friendship ins’t recommend to share feelings ors are nice, they're not recommended for the sharing of feelings or expecting a deep sense of trust because theiry are notn't sufficiently close enough to do this and they don’t even care very muchreally care about you.
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    • While, in close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer.
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    • While, inIn the case of a close friendship you can talk about your personal problems, you can trust in the person and the friendship will be longer. ¶
      , there is trust and someone with whom you can confidently discuss your personal problems.
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