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Text from noor_alsaa2 - English

    • My journey to Turkey

    • I started my journey Approximately at january in istanbul especially .i leared Lot of things in their lives and how they are manage their kive and work .
    • Actually they have a good environment for geting creative thoughts and happy in study abd work .
    • I decided in the another journy atay in it and start my new live in this beautiful country .

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • I started my journey Approximately at january in istanbul especially .i leared Lot of things in their lives and how they are manage their kive and work .
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    • I started my journey Approximately at jsometime around January in iIstanbul especially .il. I learned Lallot of things inabout their lives and how they are manage their kivlife and work .
    • I started my journey Approximately at jarounf January i. In iIstanbul, especially .i, I learned Lot of things in their lives and how they are manage their ka lot about how Turks live and work .
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    • Actually they have a good environment for geting creative thoughts and happy in study abd work .
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    • Actually they have a goodreat environment for getencouraging creative thoughts andity and for being happy iwhen studying abnd working .
    • Actually, they have a good environment for geting creative thoughts and happy in study abd work that fosters creativity and happiness in the workplace.
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