添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！修正済み

noor_alsaa2からのテキスト - English

    • My journey to Turkey

    • I started my journey Approximately at january in istanbul especially .i leared Lot of things in their lives and how they are manage their kive and work .
    • Actually they have a good environment for geting creative thoughts and happy in study abd work .
    • I decided in the another journy atay in it and start my new live in this beautiful country .

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English