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    • December 7th.

    • Today in Colombia is the Candles day (in spanish Dia de las velitas).
    • At night , people celebrate this day turning on colour candles front their houses, in downtown celebrate a parade that cross the city, and turn on the lights of the city.
    • On a day like today, I met my girlfriend.
    • Years ago while my mom I were walking through the downtown, we saw the inaguration of a mall, we came into and we were amazed, In front the mall was a colossal Christmas tree and many more.
    • When we were looking the stores I wanted sit down, therefore I went to sit on the couch out of the store, my mom continue select and seek in the store.
    • While I was sitting on the couch, I saw the reflect the window an adorable girl.
    • I was thinking that she didn’t notice that I saw her, althought I was mistaken, because she turn to looked me, after she came over and we started up a conversation.
    • I am timid and she’s serene, well now we have eight years of relationship.

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    • At night , people celebrate this day turning on colour candles front their houses, in downtown celebrate a parade that cross the city, and turn on the lights of the city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At night , people who celebrate this day turning onwill turn on some colour candles in front of their houses, i. In downtown celebrate, they held a parade that crosses the city, and turn on the lights of the city.
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    • Years ago while my mom I were walking through the downtown, we saw the inaguration of a mall, we came into and we were amazed, In front the mall was a colossal Christmas tree and many more.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Years ago, while my mom and I were walking through the downtown, we saw the inauguration of a mall, w. We came into and we were amazed, In front the mall wasthe mall and were amazed by a colossal Christmas tree and many morecolourful lights.
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    • When we were looking the stores I wanted sit down, therefore I went to sit on the couch out of the store, my mom continue select and seek in the store.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Whilen we were looking at the stores, I wanted to sit down, t. Therefore, I went to sit on the couch out of the store, while my mom continue selecting and seeking in the store.
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    • I was thinking that she didn’t notice that I saw her, althought I was mistaken, because she turn to looked me, after she came over and we started up a conversation.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I was tThinking that she didn’t notice that I saw her, althought'd seen her, I was mistaken, because she turn to looked me, afterafter seeing me, she came over and we started up a conversation.
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