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December 7th.
- Today in Colombia is the Candles day (in spanish Dia de las velitas).
- At night , people celebrate this day turning on colour candles front their houses, in downtown celebrate a parade that cross the city, and turn on the lights of the city.
- On a day like today, I met my girlfriend.
- Years ago while my mom I were walking through the downtown, we saw the inaguration of a mall, we came into and we were amazed, In front the mall was a colossal Christmas tree and many more.
- When we were looking the stores I wanted sit down, therefore I went to sit on the couch out of the store, my mom continue select and seek in the store.
- While I was sitting on the couch, I saw the reflect the window an adorable girl.
- I was thinking that she didn’t notice that I saw her, althought I was mistaken, because she turn to looked me, after she came over and we started up a conversation.
- I am timid and she’s serene, well now we have eight years of relationship.
- vaness182
December 2021
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