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  • Is fast food popular in your country?

  • Title: Is fast food popular in your country?
  • Do you think it causes health problems or any other kinds of problems?
  • My text: In my country there are many fast food restaurants.
    • Most of them are American chains (for example, Five Guys, McDonald’s, Burger King’s.
    • However, there are some others that are typically Italians.
    • I’d say that fast food is quite popular during week days, while during weekends people prefer to have Italian-style meals, sitting for hours at the table eating and having nice conversations with their friends or families.
    • As everything in life, the abuse of some kinds of meals may create health problems.
    • This regards in particular very fat meals, such as burgers or fried food.
    • There are some other chains that sell pizza, tacos instead, which may be less unhealthy even if also in these cases the abuse in not suggested.
    • A good balance would be to eat at home fresh and home made food and go to fast foods only twice a month.
    • During week days, when we are out of home and cannot cook, the ideal solution would be to avoid fast foods and go and eat in normal restaurants.
    • Many restaurants close to the offices are specialized in preparing meals very fast but with good and high-quality ingredients.
    • This is possible thanks to a limited variety of options in the menu, that however allows them to be quick and maintain high-quality standards.

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    • I’d say that fast food is quite popular during week days, while during weekends people prefer to have Italian-style meals, sitting for hours at the table eating and having nice conversations with their friends or families.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I’d say that fast food is quite popular during week days, while during weekends people prefer to have Italian-style meals, sitting for hours at the table eating and having nice conversations with their friends or families.
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    • There are some other chains that sell pizza, tacos instead, which may be less unhealthy even if also in these cases the abuse in not suggested.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • There are some other chains that sell pizza, or tacos instead, which may be less unhealthy even if also in these cases the abuse in not suggested, but still shouldn't be eaten frequently.
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    • There are some other chains that sell pizza, or tacos instead, which may be less unhealthy e. Even if also in these cases, the abuse in not suggesy should not be eaten so oftedn.
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    • During week days, when we are out of home and cannot cook, the ideal solution would be to avoid fast foods and go and eat in normal restaurants.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • During week days, when we are out ofaway from home and cannot cook, the ideal solution would be to avoid fast foods and go and eat in normal restaurants.
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    • During week days, when we are out ofnot home and cannot cook, the ideal solution would be to avoid fast foods and go and eat in normaleat in restaurants.
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    • Many restaurants close to the offices are specialized in preparing meals very fast but with good and high-quality ingredients.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Many restaurants close tonearby the offices are specialized in preparing meals very fast but withquickly, offering good and high-quality ingredients.
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    • Many restaurants close to the offices are specialized in preparing meals very fast butquickly with good and high-quality ingredients.
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    • This is possible thanks to a limited variety of options in the menu, that however allows them to be quick and maintain high-quality standards.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • This is possible thanks to a limited variety of options in the menu, that however allows them to be quick and maintain high-quality standards.
      genzaimugenzaimu profile picture Comments
    • This is possible thanks to a limited variety of options ion the menu, that however. However, that allows them to be quick and maintain high-quality standards.
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