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  • Is fast food popular in your country?

  • Title: Is fast food popular in your country?
  • Do you think it causes health problems or any other kinds of problems?
  • My text: In my country there are many fast food restaurants.
    • Most of them are American chains (for example, Five Guys, McDonald’s, Burger King’s.
    • However, there are some others that are typically Italians.
    • I’d say that fast food is quite popular during week days, while during weekends people prefer to have Italian-style meals, sitting for hours at the table eating and having nice conversations with their friends or families.
    • As everything in life, the abuse of some kinds of meals may create health problems.
    • This regards in particular very fat meals, such as burgers or fried food.
    • There are some other chains that sell pizza, tacos instead, which may be less unhealthy even if also in these cases the abuse in not suggested.
    • A good balance would be to eat at home fresh and home made food and go to fast foods only twice a month.
    • During week days, when we are out of home and cannot cook, the ideal solution would be to avoid fast foods and go and eat in normal restaurants.
    • Many restaurants close to the offices are specialized in preparing meals very fast but with good and high-quality ingredients.
    • This is possible thanks to a limited variety of options in the menu, that however allows them to be quick and maintain high-quality standards.

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