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    • Dangerous Fun

    • Have you ever thought how much rubbish we make just for our fun?
  • For example: balloons, flying lanterns, petards, confetti and so on.
    • I used to like balloons - it was associated with a holiday.
    • Once my friend and I launched a flying lantern, it was in the shape of heart and should be a culmination of our special day.
    • After launched I rather worried how would it not cause a fire than enjoyed it.
    • And indeed, flying lanterns is quite dangerous, it is open uncontrollable source of fire, which has already become a reason of lots fires.
    • So, since 2014 in Russia strict restrictions have been applying about them, which even provide a criminal liability in case of a fire.
  • Balloons aren’t much better.
    • They please just some minutes and decompose over years, poisoning animals and sea inhabitants, which use the rest of balloons as food.
    • Actually I’m not an ardent environmentalist, but I believe that we should be more deliberate and responsible, choosing harmless ways of fun.

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    • Once my friend and I launched a flying lantern, it was in the shape of heart and should be a culmination of our special day.
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    • And indeed, flying lanterns is quite dangerous, it is open uncontrollable source of fire, which has already become a reason of lots fires.
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    • And indeed, flying lanterns isare quite dangerous, it is. They are an open uncontrollable source of fire, which and hasve already become a reason ofcaused lots of fires.
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    • So, since 2014 in Russia strict restrictions have been applying about them, which even provide a criminal liability in case of a fire.
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    • So, since 2014 in Russia, strict restrictions have been applying about them, which even provide aied to them in Russia. There is even criminal liability in the case of a fire.
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    • They please just some minutes and decompose over years, poisoning animals and sea inhabitants, which use the rest of balloons as food.
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    • They please just some minutes and decompose over yearsgive pleasure only for a few minutes but take years to decompose, poisoning animals and sea inhabitants,creatures which use the remnantst of balloons as food.
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    • They please just some minutes and decompose over years, poisoning animals and sea inhabitants,After having provided a few minutes of pleasure, they take many years to decompose, harming animals on land and in the seas which useeat the rest of balloons as foodm.
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    • Actually I’m not an ardent environmentalist, but I believe that we should be more deliberate and responsible, choosing harmless ways of fun.
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    • Actually I’m not an ardent environmentalist, but I believe that we should be more deliberatecareful and responsible, choosing harmless ways ofto have fun.
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    • ActuallyWhile I’m not an ardent environmentalist, but I believe that we should be more deliberate and responsible, choosing harmless ways of in what we choose to do for fun.
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