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    • Dangerous Fun

    • Have you ever thought how much rubbish we make just for our fun?
  • For example: balloons, flying lanterns, petards, confetti and so on.
    • I used to like balloons - it was associated with a holiday.
    • Once my friend and I launched a flying lantern, it was in the shape of heart and should be a culmination of our special day.
    • After launched I rather worried how would it not cause a fire than enjoyed it.
    • And indeed, flying lanterns is quite dangerous, it is open uncontrollable source of fire, which has already become a reason of lots fires.
    • So, since 2014 in Russia strict restrictions have been applying about them, which even provide a criminal liability in case of a fire.
  • Balloons aren’t much better.
    • They please just some minutes and decompose over years, poisoning animals and sea inhabitants, which use the rest of balloons as food.
    • Actually I’m not an ardent environmentalist, but I believe that we should be more deliberate and responsible, choosing harmless ways of fun.

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