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  • I am not sure about the tense for tell stories

  • Hello.
    • I need help with this, because sometimes I feel like I wanna talk in present tense but am not sure if is alright, in here I talk about a book, could you help me with the proper tenses?
    • Thank you: Maldito Karma tells the story of a presenter called Kim.
    • She is selfish and only cares for her fame.
    • What she did not know is that fate had something prepared, she died in the most unusual way possible.
    • But it doesn’t end there, because she wakes up from death, although she is somewhat different.
    • She was reincarnated as an ant.
    • So, while living as an ant she managed to be closer to her family than she was when she lived as a human.
  • She was able to observe them more closely.
    • She sees how her family suffers for her death.
  • Also, she worries that her husband might end up being with another woman after she has just passed away, although she was unfaithful.
    • So after some unfortunate events, she understood that she must accumulate good karma to climb the ladder of reincarnation and become human again.
    • But the road is gonna be tough.
    • The book is very funny.
    • It also brings up something that is very common, the fact that sometimes we neglect our families for work.
    • Through this story she will reflect on everything she has lost, of what she has had in her hands and that she has not known how to value.
    • Many times we talk about Karma, but in reality we don’t even know very well what it is, in fact I didn’t know.
    • Generally, karma is interpreted as a cosmic ”law” of retribution, or cause and effect.
    • According to karma, each successive reincarnation would be conditioned by the acts performed in previous lives.
    • If you have been a good person you accumulate good karma and if you have been bad, then you get bad karma.
    • A small example from the book is that dictators reincarnate like intestinal bacteria.
    • At the end of the book the protagonist has a metamorphosis figuratively and also literally.
    • The Kim who dies is not the same as at the end of the book.
    • She manages to learn from her mistakes and to value the important things, not the material ones.

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