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    • I need help with this, because sometimes I feel like I wanna talk in present tense but am not sure if is alright, in here I talk about a book, could you help me with the proper tenses?
    • Thank you: Maldito Karma tells the story of a presenter called Kim.
    • She is selfish and only cares for her fame.
    • What she did not know is that fate had something prepared, she died in the most unusual way possible.
    • But it doesn’t end there, because she wakes up from death, although she is somewhat different.
    • She was reincarnated as an ant.
    • So, while living as an ant she managed to be closer to her family than she was when she lived as a human.
  • She was able to observe them more closely.
    • She sees how her family suffers for her death.
  • Also, she worries that her husband might end up being with another woman after she has just passed away, although she was unfaithful.
    • So after some unfortunate events, she understood that she must accumulate good karma to climb the ladder of reincarnation and become human again.
    • But the road is gonna be tough.
    • The book is very funny.
    • It also brings up something that is very common, the fact that sometimes we neglect our families for work.
    • Through this story she will reflect on everything she has lost, of what she has had in her hands and that she has not known how to value.
    • Many times we talk about Karma, but in reality we don’t even know very well what it is, in fact I didn’t know.
    • Generally, karma is interpreted as a cosmic ”law” of retribution, or cause and effect.
    • According to karma, each successive reincarnation would be conditioned by the acts performed in previous lives.
    • If you have been a good person you accumulate good karma and if you have been bad, then you get bad karma.
    • A small example from the book is that dictators reincarnate like intestinal bacteria.
    • At the end of the book the protagonist has a metamorphosis figuratively and also literally.
    • The Kim who dies is not the same as at the end of the book.
    • She manages to learn from her mistakes and to value the important things, not the material ones.

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    • I need help with this, because sometimes I feel like I wanna talk in present tense but am not sure if is alright, in here I talk about a book, could you help me with the proper tenses?
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    • I need help with this, because sometimes I feel like I wanna talk inusing the present tense but am not sure if is alright, icorrect. In there I talk about a book, could following text I will discuss a book. Can you help me with using the proper tenses?
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    • What she did not know is that fate had something prepared, she died in the most unusual way possible.
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    • What she didoes not know is that fate hads something prepared, shein store for her and that she will died in thea moust unusual way possible.
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    • But it doesn’t end there, because she wakes up from death, although she is somewhat different.
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    • But it doesn’t end there, because she awakens up from death, although she is somewhat different changed person.
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    • So, while living as an ant she managed to be closer to her family than she was when she lived as a human.
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    • So, while living as an ant she managed to beAs an ant she becomes closer to her family than she was when she livedid as a human.
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    • Also, she worries that her husband might end up being with another woman after she has just passed away, although she was unfaithful.
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    • So after some unfortunate events, she understood that she must accumulate good karma to climb the ladder of reincarnation and become human again.
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    • So aAfter someeveral unfortunate events, she understoodands that she must accumulate good karma to climb the ladder of reincarnation and become human again.
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    • It also brings up something that is very common, the fact that sometimes we neglect our families for work.
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    • It also brings up something that is very common, the fact that sometimes weludes to the fact that in life we often neglect our families for work.
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    • Through this story she will reflect on everything she has lost, of what she has had in her hands and that she has not known how to value.
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    • Through this story she will reflect on everything she has lost, ofe story illustrates what she hwas had in her hands and that she has not known how topossession but which she lost because she failed to appreciate its value.
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    • Many times we talk about Karma, but in reality we don’t even know very well what it is, in fact I didn’t know.
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    • Many times weWe often talk about K"karma", but in realityfact we don’t even know very well what it is, in fact I didn’t knowreally know what it is. I don't know what it is.
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    • According to karma, each successive reincarnation would be conditioned by the acts performed in previous lives.
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    • According to karma, each successive reincarnation would beis conditioned by the acts performed in previous lives.
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    • If you have been a good person you accumulate good karma and if you have been bad, then you get bad karma.
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    • If you have been a good person you accumulate good karma and i. If you have been bad, then you get you accumulate bad karma.
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    • She manages to learn from her mistakes and to value the important things, not the material ones.
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    • She manages toHaving learned from her mistakes and to value the important things, not, she values what's important and not merely the material ones. ¶
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