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Văn bản từ julian_and - English

  • What I have been planning during this year.

    • this year I thought about a new goal, and that goal is having mi own bussiness.
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the deliver men for the last 4 year but now I am tired of working without achiving anything positive.
    • In that job I am not paid insurace neither vacation or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to independence or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
    • I have been working hard in order to save the most money I can, I need aproximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
    • I thought about a chinese restaurant given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becouse of its profits.
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a chinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.

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  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the deliver men for the last 4 year but now I am tired of working without achiving anything positive.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the delivery mean for the last 4 years but now I am tired of working without achieving anything positive.
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  • câu 3
    • In that job I am not paid insurace neither vacation or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to independence or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • In that job, I am not paid insurance neither, vacation, or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to be independencet or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
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  • câu 4
    • I have been working hard in order to save the most money I can, I need aproximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I have been working hard in order to save the mostaximum amount of money I can, I need approximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • I thought about a chinese restaurant given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becouse of its profits.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I thought about a cChinese restaurant, given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becoause of its profits.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a chinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a cChinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6