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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

Text from julian_and - English

  • What I have been planning during this year.

    • this year I thought about a new goal, and that goal is having mi own bussiness.
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the deliver men for the last 4 year but now I am tired of working without achiving anything positive.
    • In that job I am not paid insurace neither vacation or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to independence or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
    • I have been working hard in order to save the most money I can, I need aproximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
    • I thought about a chinese restaurant given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becouse of its profits.
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a chinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the deliver men for the last 4 year but now I am tired of working without achiving anything positive.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I have been working for a restaurant as the delivery mean for the last 4 years but now I am tired of working without achieving anything positive.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
    • In that job I am not paid insurace neither vacation or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to independence or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In that job, I am not paid insurance neither, vacation, or anything similar. that is the reason why I want to be independencet or at least get a new job in which I get the previous I said.
      Mamarambo84Mamarambo84 profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
    • I have been working hard in order to save the most money I can, I need aproximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I have been working hard in order to save the mostaximum amount of money I can, I need approximately 15 millions pesos to start a new business.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • I thought about a chinese restaurant given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becouse of its profits.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I thought about a cChinese restaurant, given the that I know that it is a good a idea to create that kind of bussiness becoause of its profits.
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    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a chinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I know that since I the restaurant where I work is a cChinese restaurant and I discovered that the owner sells a lot of his products as it hasn’t a limit of sale.
      Mamarambo84Mamarambo84 profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6