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  • My name is Polina.
    • Currently, I’m working as a sales representative in an IT company called Tensor that develops software and cloud solutions for business needs such as services for online accounting, CRM systems, and programs that optimize business processes in retail and wholesale.
    • I have been living in Indonesia, Malaysia, and Germany for a while.
    • I lived there not a long time, yet it gave me a lot.
    • Mainly for my personal growth.
    • Experience of living abroad taught me how to operate in multinational teams, improved my soft skills and English proficiency.
    • Aside from my full-time job, I study business administration with a minor in computer science.
    • In a year I’m going to finish my bachelor’s degree.
  • As for my passions and hobbies, I am into photography and outdoor activities.
    • Not a long time ago I explored the Caucus region and South of Russia, and also visited the Republic of Abkhazia with my friend and colleague from my current job.

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