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- My name is Polina.
- I was born in Russia and currently, I live in Moscow.
- I work as a sales representative for an IT company that develops software for business needs such as services for online accounting, CRM systems, and programs that optimize business processes in retail and wholesale.
- I’m planning to change my job position and start my career in business analysis and start some business on the side in the nearest future.
- From this entrepreneurship class and from my studies at UoPeople, I’m willing to gain applied knowledge in starting and owning a business.
- I used to work as a self-employed in video production and in marketing fields.
- This is quite not the same as owning a real business with officially employed workers that you have to take care of, cash flows to manage, customers to serve, and partners to negotiate.
- I believe I can be an entrepreneur since I have a good sense of the market, problem-defining and solving skills, organizational experience, understanding of marketing and sales, basic knowledge in accounting.
- And last but not least I’m ready to take risks and chase opportunities no matter what.
- As from my experience, not many people are ready to leave their 9 to 5 jobs in order to work 24/7 at the beginning and build their own business.
- Sometimes it’s simply due to obligations such as mortgage or children and they can’t give up stable income and take financial risks.
- And some people just want to do something cool for a while and then resting for the rest of their days.
- As for me, I understand that it takes time, effort, knowledge, and patience to start a business from scratch and operate it in accordance with market needs, and your own values.
- polinazhdanovaSeptember 2021Vote now!
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