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USING A CREDIT CARD
- USING A CREDIT CARD The use of credit cards has increased with the increase of the pandemic in the world because due to the pandemic , public began to suffer from poverty; therefore, public had to use credit cards.
- There are some advantages and disadvantages to using a credit card.
- Credit cards can be beneficial to make it easier to buy things ;on the other hand, since people are so easy to use credit cards, they also make it easy to overspend.
- First of all, the main advantage of using a credit card is making it easier to buy things.
- People using credit cards say that when you go to a shopping mall or anywhere, credit cards payment is easier than cash money.
- Furthermore, people can earn reward points when they spend.
- For instance, when you spend far more money for shopping, you can earn money thanks to your credit card.
- Briefly, the more money you spend, the more money you earn.
- On the other hand, the biggest disadvantage of credit cards is easy to use and therefore people make it easy to overspend.
- As people spend their money for shopping, people don’t care too much and along with using a credit card, people began to lose themselves while shopping, which creates a society with a lot of debt.
- In addition, credit cards include annual fees.
- People started to kill themselves because of this annual fees.
- To sum up, there are some pros and cons to using a credit card.
- The advantage of using a credit card is that it makes it easier to buy things while the main disadvantage is that it is easy to use and thus people make it easy to overspend.
- I think people should start gradually decreasing credit card usage.
- mahmut_merJuly 2021100% GOOD (1 votes)
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