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    • Working part time after school

    • Students need to have worked part time with experiencing economic crisis, especially in Turkey, in the world so far.
  • Parents don’t want their children to work part time jobs after school because they believe students need to concentrate only on their education.
    • While some students think like this opinion, others want to stand on their own two feet because they will live on their own in the future.
  • Working part time after school has both advantages and disadvantages.
    • The main advantage is that students stand on their own feet while its disadvantages are fatigue and jealousy of other friends’ lives.
    • First of all, students stand on their own feet thanks to working part time after school.
    • Some students don’t want to push their parents in terms of economical and thus they would like to work part time jobs after school even if they are very tired.
  • When they grow up, they become responsible for everything, which creates a sensible public.
    • On the other hand, students who work part time jobs after school are very fatigued.
    • Students are very tired when they come home, both studying for their exams and working part-time jobs.
    • Prominent researchers engaging in long and careful consideration tell us that students who work part time jobs generally fail because it takes a lot of patience to achieve this.
    • In addition to fatigue, students working part time jobs are very jealous of their friends because when they work part time, their friends will enjoy life.
  • Therefore, students working part time ignore them and should learn about life’s difficulties.
  • Otherwise, they will continue to work unwillingly, which leads to an unhappy life.
    • To sum up, working part time after school has some advantages and disadvantages.
  • While students stand on their own feet due to part time jobs, they are very fatigued and jealous of their friends.
    • I think working part time after school is a very good process in our life.

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