Korektoj

HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Korektita

Text from mahmut_mer - English

    • Working part time after school

    • Students need to have worked part time with experiencing economic crisis, especially in Turkey, in the world so far.
  • Parents don’t want their children to work part time jobs after school because they believe students need to concentrate only on their education.
    • While some students think like this opinion, others want to stand on their own two feet because they will live on their own in the future.
  • Working part time after school has both advantages and disadvantages.
    • The main advantage is that students stand on their own feet while its disadvantages are fatigue and jealousy of other friends’ lives.
    • First of all, students stand on their own feet thanks to working part time after school.
    • Some students don’t want to push their parents in terms of economical and thus they would like to work part time jobs after school even if they are very tired.
  • When they grow up, they become responsible for everything, which creates a sensible public.
    • On the other hand, students who work part time jobs after school are very fatigued.
    • Students are very tired when they come home, both studying for their exams and working part-time jobs.
    • Prominent researchers engaging in long and careful consideration tell us that students who work part time jobs generally fail because it takes a lot of patience to achieve this.
    • In addition to fatigue, students working part time jobs are very jealous of their friends because when they work part time, their friends will enjoy life.
  • Therefore, students working part time ignore them and should learn about life’s difficulties.
  • Otherwise, they will continue to work unwillingly, which leads to an unhappy life.
    • To sum up, working part time after school has some advantages and disadvantages.
  • While students stand on their own feet due to part time jobs, they are very fatigued and jealous of their friends.
    • I think working part time after school is a very good process in our life.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Students need to have worked part time with experiencing economic crisis, especially in Turkey, in the world so far.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Students need to have worked part time with experiencing economic crisis, especially in Turkey, in the world so far.

      NOTE: I would like to help you w/ this statement -- it definitely needs help/fixing -- but I'm uncertain as to what meaning you are trying to convey.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1
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    • Parents don’t want their children to work part time jobs after school because they believe students need to concentrate only on their education.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
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    • While some students think like this opinion, others want to stand on their own two feet because they will live on their own in the future.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • While some students think like this opinionagree with this thinking, others want to stand on their own two feet because they will have to live on their own in the future.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
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    • The main advantage is that students stand on their own feet while its disadvantages are fatigue and jealousy of other friends’ lives.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • The main advantage is that students stand on their own feet while itsgain independence; the main disadvantages are fatigue and jealousy of otheir friends’ lives.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 5
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    • Some students don’t want to push their parents in terms of economical and thus they would like to work part time jobs after school even if they are very tired.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Some students who don’t want to push their parents in terms of economical and thus they would like tobe a financial burden on their parents work part time jobs after school even if they are very tired.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
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    • Students are very tired when they come home, both studying for their exams and working part-time jobs.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Students are very tired when they come home, bothAfter studying for their exams and working part-time jobs, students return home very tired.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 10
  • Frazo 11
    • Prominent researchers engaging in long and careful consideration tell us that students who work part time jobs generally fail because it takes a lot of patience to achieve this.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Prominent researchers engaging in long and careful consideration tell uThe findings of rigorous research suggests that students who work part time jobs generally fail because it takes a lot of patience to achieve thisfor lack of patience.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • In addition to fatigue, students working part time jobs are very jealous of their friends because when they work part time, their friends will enjoy life.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • In addition to fatigue, students who working part time jobs are very jealous of their friends because whilen they're work part time,ing their friends willare enjoy lifeing themselves.
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    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
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