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    • Should mothers stay home when when children are young?

  • Hi guys.
    • Today’s question is should mothers stay home when children are young?
    • In my opinion ,yes, because that time is so important and children need to more care and more attention then it’s better we put more time for them.

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    • In my opinion ,yes, because that time is so important and children need to more care and more attention then it’s better we put more time for them.
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    • In my opinion ,yes, because that time is so important and children need to more care and more attention then it’s better we put more time for them.

      In my opinion, yes, because that time is so important and children need more care and attention, so it's better that we give them more time.
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