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- Should mothers stay home when when children are young?
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- Today’s question is should mothers stay home when children are young?
- In my opinion ,yes, because that time is so important and children need to more care and more attention then it’s better we put more time for them.

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- In my opinion ,yes, because that time is so important and children need to more care and more attention then it’s better we put more time for them.
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