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- Hello i'm french of 23 years old .
- I come in perth in november and I also search a job . i'm very motivated , dynamic and an impeccable presentation .

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Tiêu đề
- IT's GOOD ?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~IT's~~ Is it GOOD ?
  Mariiem Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Hello i'm french of 23 years old .
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Hello i, I'm french ofman aged 23 years old .
  Mariiem Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  50% GOOD (2 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I come in perth in november and I also search a job . i'm very motivated , dynamic and an impeccable presentation .
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I will come ~~in p~~to Perth ~~in n~~next November ~~¶and I also search~~, looking for a job . i¶I'm very motivated , dynamic and ~~an impeccable~~ presenta~~tion~~ble .
  Mariiem Comments 1
  
  Report as spam?
  
  0% GOOD (1 votes)
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2