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- IT's GOOD ?
- Hello i'm french of 23 years old .
- I come in perth in november and I also search a job . i'm very motivated , dynamic and an impeccable presentation .

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- IT's GOOD ?
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- ~~IT's~~ Is it GOOD ?
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- Hello i'm french of 23 years old .
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- Hello i, I'm french ofman aged 23 years old .
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- I come in perth in november and I also search a job . i'm very motivated , dynamic and an impeccable presentation .
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- I will come ~~in p~~to Perth ~~in n~~next November ~~¶and I also search~~, looking for a job . i¶I'm very motivated , dynamic and ~~an impeccable~~ presenta~~tion~~ble .
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