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I want to travel.
- I want to travel because i'm so bored in my small town.
- All my friends are gone in holidays and i'm alone with my brother.
- The clouds arrive and hide the summer sun to ruin my vacations.

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câu 1
- I want to travel because i'm so bored in my small town.
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- I want to travel because iI'm so bored in my small town.
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câu 2
- All my friends are gone in holidays and i'm alone with my brother.
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- All my friends arhave gone ion holidays and iI'm alone with my brother.
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câu 3
- The clouds arrive and hide the summer sun to ruin my vacations.
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- The clouds arrive and hide the summer sun to ruin my vacations.
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