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Text from Dark-elf - English

  • I want to travel.

    • I want to travel because i'm so bored in my small town.
    • All my friends are gone in holidays and i'm alone with my brother.
    • The clouds arrive and hide the summer sun to ruin my vacations.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English