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BANTU BUAT PEMBETULAN SEKARANG!Tidak dapat dibatalkan

Teks daripada fb_1617887391 - English

    • The Choices

    • Notice: For my paragraphs below, I want corrections only from a native English speaker.
    • Many people think these days we have a lot of choices that were not available in the past.
    • I agree with this viewpoint.
  • For instance, when we compare our choices in the current time with the options that were existed in the fifties and sixties in the twentieth century, we notice the difference.
  • For example, in education, people now in many fields have the option to study on campus or taking their courses online, and this does not stop on the education, but extend to other sectors.We see the plethora of choices exposed clearly in COVID-19, in which millions of people did their work from home by using the internet.
  • So we could attribute the abundance of alternatives to the advancements in technology.
  • Imagine this epidemic spread in the world in the fifties in the last century; then the economy would paralyse due to the rare choices they need to use as alternatives to social distancing.
  • These choices are not exclusive to education and work but extend to other sectors such as tourism, which in the past if we need to meet people from other culture and talk to them you had to travel to their country.
  • In contrast , now we can meet people virtually from over the world by just clicking the bottoms on your computers or mobiles.
  • In summary, I definetly agree that nowadays we have choices that our ancestors did not have, to the extent that might confusion because of their abundance or similarity.
  • However, some people using these choices in a bad way, which many criminals used these options to distribute heroin to increase their wealth illegally.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
    • Notice: For my paragraphs below, I want corrections only from a native English speaker.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Notice: For my paragraphs below, I want corrections only from a native English speakerI want native English speakers only to correct the following paragraphs.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • For instance, when we compare our choices in the current time with the options that were existed in the fifties and sixties in the twentieth century, we notice the difference.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • For example, in education, people now in many fields have the option to study on campus or taking their courses online, and this does not stop on the education, but extend to other sectors.We see the plethora of choices exposed clearly in COVID-19, in which millions of people did their work from home by using the internet.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • Imagine this epidemic spread in the world in the fifties in the last century; then the economy would paralyse due to the rare choices they need to use as alternatives to social distancing.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • These choices are not exclusive to education and work but extend to other sectors such as tourism, which in the past if we need to meet people from other culture and talk to them you had to travel to their country.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • In summary, I definetly agree that nowadays we have choices that our ancestors did not have, to the extent that might confusion because of their abundance or similarity.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
    • However, some people using these choices in a bad way, which many criminals used these options to distribute heroin to increase their wealth illegally.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11