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- Hello !
Hello!
- I'm 15 and on the one hand I would like to improve my English and on the other hand I can teach you french.
- Why don't work together and become friends by the same occasion?

Dark-elfAugust 2013Bầu chọn ngay!
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- Hello !
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Hello !
  arckain Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 1
- Hello!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- I'm 15 and on the one hand I would like to improve my English and on the other hand I can teach you french.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I'm 15 and, on ~~the~~ one hand, I would like to improve my English, and, on the other hand, I can teach you french.
  arckain Comments
  
  Report as spam?
  
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- Why don't work together and become friends by the same occasion?
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Why don't we work together and become friends by the same occasion?
  DianaKSmith Comments
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3