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Văn bản từ Grogu - English

    • owning a home or renting one

    • In many countries it is believed that owning a home is only for wealthy people and that is a sign of their social standings.
    • Different cultures having an important role in people way of thinking about these sort of problems.
    • From my standpoint, depends on the economic situation of each country the rational decision might be different.
    • For instance, when the inflation rate is constant and not drastically increased, you can invest the money which you can buy a house with or even spend the money for other activities which you find them more interesting for yourself .On the other hand, having a house or a shelter is one of the basic needs of each individuals and the satisfaction due to that is undeniable and it is as a result of a steady salary which is one of the keys of being In a right way of earning and spending your money but I strongly disagree with putting pressure or even blame people .for In most economy books have been written that if you buy something such as house or a property, you save the value and the worthiness of your money or probably even increase that.
    • And of course we should not forget the possibility of growing the rents.
    • To put it succinctly, I find the advantages of owning a home more than its harms and I see that as a desirable short term goal but I strongly disagree with putting pressure on that.

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    • In many countries it is believed that owning a home is only for wealthy people and that is a sign of their social standings.
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    • In many countries it is believed that owning a home is only for wealthy people and that it is a sign of their social standingtus.
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    • Different cultures having an important role in people way of thinking about these sort of problems.
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    • DifferentEvery cultures havings an important role in people way ofts own philosophy in the way people thinking about these sort of problemsis matter.
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    • For instance, when the inflation rate is constant and not drastically increased, you can invest the money which you can buy a house with or even spend the money for other activities which you find them more interesting for yourself .On the other hand, having a house or a shelter is one of the basic needs of each individuals and the satisfaction due to that is undeniable and it is as a result of a steady salary which is one of the keys of being In a right way of earning and spending your money but I strongly disagree with putting pressure or even blame people .for In most economy books have been written that if you buy something such as house or a property, you save the value and the worthiness of your money or probably even increase that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • For instance, when the inflation rate is constant and not drastically increased, you can invest the money which you canto buy a house with or even spend the money for other activities which you find them more interesting for yourself .endeavors. On the other hand, having a house or a shelter is one of thea basic needs of each individuals for everyone and the satisfaction due to that is undeniable and it is a. As a result of, a steady salary which is one of the keys of being In a right way of earning and spending your money bis essential. But, I strongly disagree with putting pressure or even blameing people. .for In most economyics books haveit has been written that if you buy something such as house or a property, you save the value and the worthiness of your money or probably even increase thait.
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    • To put it succinctly, I find the advantages of owning a home more than its harms and I see that as a desirable short term goal but I strongly disagree with putting pressure on that.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To put it succinctly, I find the advantages of owning a home more than its harms and I see that as a desirable short term goal bhome ownership has more pros than cons. But, I strongly disagree with putting pressure on thatpressuring people into buying homes. ¶
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