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  • Leisure time

  • It is generally accepted that the pace of modern life has increased and more people work longer hours.
  • We simply cannot spend our free time only by laying in bed or watching TV.
  • For a while watching TV may be enjoyable but it is not very fulfilling over a period of time.
    • Another, ofter unacknowledgeged consequence of modern life is how fast an activity can become boring for us.
    • For this reason, it is recommendable not to forget that doing something productive can also help to reduce stress.
    • In short, it its clearly desirable that we not only relax, but that we do something worthwile in our leisure time.
    • In my view, the best use of leisure time is to take care of the body and the brain meanwhile.
    • Here are two of the most profitable ways of spending leisure time: doing sport at the gym or learning languages.
    • There is less social cohesion now that there was previously but both activities help making the mind free from all the worries from the work.
    • There can be no doubt that you can’t continue thinking about the work tasks whether you work at some of these activities by your leisure time.
    • In short, it is cleary desirable that we not only relax but that we do something worthwile in our leisure time.
    • Clearly, if leisure time is to become previous to us, is important that it become really effective by the recovering.

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    • It is generally accepted that the pace of modern life has increased and more people work longer hours.
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    • There is less social cohesion now that there was previously but both activities help making the mind free from all the worries from the work.
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    • There is less social cohesion now thatn there was previously but both activities help makinge the mind free from all the worries from the work.
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    • There can be no doubt that you can’t continue thinking about the work tasks whether you work at some of these activities by your leisure time.
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    • There can be no doubt that you can’t continue thinking about the work tasks, whether you work aton some of these activities bywith your leisure time.
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    • There can be no doubt that you can’t continue thinking about the work tasks whethnever you work at some of these activities bydo activities related to physical exercise or learning languages during your leisure time.
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    • Clearly, if leisure time is to become previous to us, is important that it become really effective by the recovering.
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    • Clearly, if leisure time is to become previouseffective to us, it is important that it become really effective by theaids in recovering.
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    • Clearly, if leisure time is to become previous to us, beneficial for us, then it is important that it become reals truly effective by the recoveringin helping us to recover from work stress.
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